The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the way you included the kitty in this piece. I liked the line about not noticing the claws cutting into her skin. Well done!
Wow...excellent read with such powerfully moving messages throughout.
Loved your descriptions and the scriptures at the end.
This is a great story. I sensed the conflict right away. The cat felt like another character in this piece. My cat saved my life once by batting a bottle of medicine out of my hand. I realized it was too soon to take them. I truly believe God sends us pets to speak to us and help us, often when we are at our most stubborn. The resolutions were great. Good job.