The Official Writing Challenge
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You gave such beautiful descriptions! Personally, I would not like to live in a place where it rains all the time. And you in a tropical place- are you concerned Your entry is well done!
This is a nice piece. I enjoyed the internal conflict and the natural one. You do a great job of resolving them. Too much of almost anything, even sun can burn. This is a nice take on the topic with a sweet message.
04/27/19
I enjoyed this and the messages throughout the piece.
Thank you,
Blessings~
As my friend used to tell me, "All sunshine makes the desert."

I liked the message to this entry. This piece went full circle.

I believe we need all the seasons to enrich our live. All rain would be dreary.


Well written piece.
Congratulations on ranking 20 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message.
05/10/19
I like this piece. I lived in the Philippines many years ago and could have used your perspective then. It might have made me more appreciative of the tropics. I missed the seasons! Your first sentence hooked me for sure, but honestly, I don't get how rain is you're decadence. Nevertheless I can see why you wanted to use the sentence. Too good to waste:-)