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Very beautiful. To me, it's weak on the topic of rain, but it's a very moving piece.
This is really lovely. I wrote a piece once where Jesus thought of me as he died on the cross. This piece reminds me of that one. It's a beautiful message. I can feel your passion.
Oh this is so powerfully done!
I was moved to tears!
Thank you for this.
This reminds me of communion. When you come to the Lord's table, you are always welcome.

Besides the brief reference to rain down on me, I couldn't correlate it to the topic.