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Very beautiful. To me, it's weak on the topic of rain, but it's a very moving piece.
This is really lovely. I wrote a piece once where Jesus thought of me as he died on the cross. This piece reminds me of that one. It's a beautiful message. I can feel your passion.
04/27/19
Oh this is so powerfully done!
I was moved to tears!
Thank you for this.
Blessings~
This reminds me of communion. When you come to the Lord's table, you are always welcome.

Besides the brief reference to rain down on me, I couldn't correlate it to the topic.