The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/19
What a lovely story. I hope it gets published in a teen magazine. . . .if teens read magazines these days.
What a cool story! I would love to hear more. In the past, I've worked at camps for kids with disabilities, and I know it's a precious experience for them. Well done!
04/18/19
I really like this. The first lines caught my attention. I wanted to keep reading to find out more about Al. I think you meant series instead of serious. I've made that exact same typo in the past. It would be nice to see this piece published outside of the challenge. Well done!
The conflict in the beginning grabbed my attention and held it to the very end. The dialog moved the story alone at a perfect pace. The message is clear and powerful.
This is a really good story, beginning to end. I see you moving to Masters very soon!
I think this story would be an encouragement to kids with challenges. I hope it goes farther than here.
Thumbs up!
04/24/19
I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. It really made me think.
04/24/19
Very well written. Intriguing and kept my interest from start to finish.
Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!
This entry grabbed my attention from beginning to end.

It was interesting how teens compare their disabilities with other teens.

Well written and congrats on the EC award.