The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww, poor little one! I've been the recipient of such words from an aunt, and still remember them to this day. I'm curious though, why were there baby mice in a tin can in the hen house? And did they survive the fall?
04/19/19
A poignant and relatable story well told and with a very relevant message. We need to be so careful with our words to and about children. Life and death are in the tongue.
I could feel the pain of the little girl, along with the earlier wonder and delight. What a great message. I wanted to scoop her up into my arms. You did a fine job of developing the characters and delivering an important message.
Thank you for writing about this topic! It held my interest and thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Well done!
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