The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/19
I enjoyed reading this - relatable, funny and flowed nicely!
04/18/19
Chuckling. My husband, out of the blue, said,"I don't think you need a facelift." He couldn't understand why that was NOT a compliment. Ah yes, clumsy tongues. . .Ya gotta luv em.
Loved your ending! This was a fun read, and I eagerly anticipated the next example that you would bring up.
04/19/19
Thanks for this cute entry. It made me smile. :)
I blame things like that on the y chromosome! You did a great job of writing on topic in a fresh way that made me smile. The only thing I might change would be the order in the section about the pregnant nonpregnant women. For me, I think it might have flowed a bit better if the explanation came after his blunder, but that is a really small thing. Overall, you did a fantastic job. You made me smile and I think everyone can relate in one way or another. Your ending was great too. This could have been a hard article to find a good ending for, but you totally nailed it.
I enjoyed the examples of "clumsy" in your story and especially liked your last sentence.
Oh, very, very cute! I chuckled at the ending.
I enjoyed reading your article. It made me laugh several times as I know someone who would say these funny yet sometimes awkward things. Look forward to reading more from you.
04/24/19
This made me chuckle! I think we all know a 'Nick'!