The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful imagery and lovely thoughts and messages all rolled up into this fine entry.
I felt enormous peace reading this, thank you!

You have some beautiful imagery here! I'm not quite sure where youth comes into play- perhaps the new buds of spring?
It's allegorical.
You do a great job of painting a mental picture. I chuckled a bit with jealously when you described spring springing because it is still snowing at my house from time to time. But this made your descriptions even more appealing to me. I'm eager to start anew in more than one way. I really liked your prayer too.
What a neat piece you've written. I liked the descriptions and almost felt I was there. There were a few sentences that felt awfully long - nothing a little polish wouldn't fix, though. Thanks for sharing!