The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your message and examples.
I think this is a delightful piece. You took me right through the Bible and it shows how precious kids are to God and what an impact they have on the world. I think you captured the topic in an original fresh way.
Great job with the topic, well done, Thanks!
Well done on showcasing the young people in the Bible!
I found this angle quite refreshing and really enjoyed reading it. The only thing that I didn’t like was when the Bible verse was put in. It jolted me out of the story that you were telling. The whole thing made me want to go and check out their stories...which, as far as I’m concerned, is a job well done.