The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an emotional piece. The honesty in it is inspirational. So many kids seemed to have lost the good earth dad lotto, but we are all winners when we realize who are real father is and how much he loves us.
Realistic tale of redemtion.
I enjoyed reading it and liked the realism. Keep writing.
Well done!
I'm so thankful that our heavenly father is not like our earthly father! Very moving story here.
Great take on a very real perspective. I admit when the poem's rhythm and rhyme both changed, it threw me a bit. I could see this piece polished up by using some less common words that are perhaps more descriptive. Good job!