The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/19
You have good ingredients for a fulfilling story but it needs more blending, more folding in of the Scripture verses to sound more natural. Putting the references as footnotes would be a start. You have made a good first draft. Enjoy the editing process:-)
03/08/19
Awwww...I loved this whole piece. My kind of story.

Well done,
Blessings~
Good story of the give and take of marriage. I would have liked more showing in this piece. Keep up the good work!
03/14/19
Congrats!
Blessings~