The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/19
Very nice story. You did a good job. The only problem I had was Ronald became Roger every once in awhile. That is a bit confusing.
03/08/19
Nicely done, I enjoyed this read.

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Nice ending! I wonder, however, about a newlywed couple splitting for one to go to the mission field? Why not both of them? Makes me wonder if that marriage will be doomed before it has a start to grow. I liked the dialogue.