The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/19
There are some good truths prevalent in this piece. Because Jesus has won the race, and He now lives in us we can be winners too. There is some ambiguity in this work however. You have written in two different stanzas that 'everyone can win' and again, 'everyone is a victor.' But later in another stanza state, 'no winner but me.' There is some confusion here. Otherwise, I found this piece a good read.
Isn't it amazing that we have a cheering squad waiting for us at the other end!
02/27/19
I loved your reminder that we are all winners in God's race. Well done.