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02/21/19
What a great way to illustrate what we have in Christ and how He causes us to win. And the accuser can only stand defeated at the end.

I loved this. Kept me enthralled from beginning to end.
I like this allegorical take on the fight of our lives. Well done!
02/22/19
Nicely done...
Well written entry that nailed the topic beautifully.

Blessings~
Excellent illustration of fighting off that voice in our heads that accuses us.
It kept me interested from first word to last.
Well done.
02/22/19
There are a lot of things to like in this piece. This has a powerful message, and it's one that many of us can benefit from. Well done. Keep writing. :)
02/23/19
This is good. I like it. Definitely some good reminders.

I think I, perhaps, would have ended this with the judge's declaration, rather than the MCs. The judge finally spoke. "The defendant is right. With God, he wins. Case dismissed." or something like that.

This is great over all, with some good reminders.
02/23/19
Oh wow! I love this - a battle of words, words of truth against lies.
Only those who know this power of submitting to our Father's strength will understand this kind of winning.
Well done!
I like best how you effectively showed what it takes to be a winner against the devil, who would take all our confidence. Good allegorical writing.
02/24/19
Great ending!
02/25/19
I LOVE your entry ! The fact that Christ is our Advocate, our lawyer, has always thrilled me. I often think of myself feeling an onslaught from the enemy of our souls, with Jesus taking His place in front of me, arms out-stretched to protect me, and in a strong voice declaring to my accuser, "I am her advocate, her lawyer. Anything you want to say to her has to first go through Me." What consolation to know that we are winners, not because of how good we are, but how GREAT and powerful He is. Lots of good stuff in your entry. Kudos.
02/28/19
Congrats on placing this week. You're doing great. :)
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 11th overall. Happy Dance!
02/28/19
Karlene, this is wonderful. I loved it all. Your writing gave me a great visual of the scene with the accuser and the MC standing firm against him. Great writing. Congratulations.