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02/22/19
I always loved the story of Ruth, and loved how Haman was revealed and how the LORD brought the things he did to light!

Well done,

BLessings~
02/22/19
So good! Just loved the use of alliteration to create a powerful image in the line 'the river of truth twisted and turned, tumbling over Haman's deed and washing out his wicked soul.' Appreciated this piece very much and the scripture at the end.
I also loved the book of Esther, and this story. Great job bringing it to life!
02/24/19
Well done. Only one suggestion re clarity. Use 'Mordecai, the rat" in first paragraph, rather than eleventh, for readers who may take rat to be literal or may not know Mordecai. .I liked your ending. Poetic.
02/27/19
You did a great job of retelling this Bible story. The pride of Haman was clearly evident in your descriptions.

The word "rat" didn't seem to fit this time period.
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