The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/19
Wow, powerful in content and delivery, Thank you for this!

Blessings~
02/14/19
You've got a good story here. The first paragraph is a bit confusing. I had to read it 3 times, but the story seemed to have potential so I invested in re-reading it. I believe this piece is worth spending time refining. It can be a great story.
I knew that someone was going to die, so expected it- good ending. I did find this somewhat confusing, so much information and dialogue going on. Keep on writing!
02/19/19
Interesting and powerful story.