The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/19
Wonderful job with the topic, I enjoyed this and the message at the end.
Well done,
Blessings~
Interesting story. I would have liked to see comparisons of what your MC experienced, compared to what she was now living. Also, you don't need to include the word count in your article. Breaking up the paragraphs, with more white space, makes it easier and more inviting to read. It sounds like you have an understanding of what people in this condition must go through.