The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 36 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
02/14/19
Nicely written, and totally on topic, well done!
Blessings~
02/14/19
An interesting situation. I'd like to know more - especially what Margaret was processing. Wondering if this is a true story or not.
02/15/19
I liked your use of dialogue in this piece which kept the story flowing along well. Good job and thanks for sharing.
Your story held my attention- very interesting. When Margaret said "I see" I would have liked to see what she sees!. What a culture shock she must have experienced!
02/19/19
Very interesting and nicely written.