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What a refreshing article. I do not paint my nails for this very reason. I've always thought, "That's not what makes one's feet beautiful according to God's standards!" I wholeheartedly agree with what you've written.

There was one awkward sentence that could perhaps be written with more clarity. It was a confusing, although I did get the 'gist' of it:

"There was a team of fellow workers.....the translators that had worked so hard on translating a similar language, those that offered hospitality so translators could concentrate on translation, churches and individuals that financially supported translators, teachers, and support staff."

Even so, a much needed message. Great job.
Forgive my own typo. It should say: "It was confusing," (Just that sentence, not the wonderful and insightful message.)
Thanks for reminding me of What Paul said in Romans about beautiful feet - certainly a different take on what we generally think about beautiful feet. This was a good piece of writing with a strong message.
Fresh, interesting and inspiring. Good job!
I liked your title! I would love to hear more about Simon- like what all he did to cause the shoes to be so thin.
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