The Official Writing Challenge
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Amen! Yes, we ARE glad that God backs up His Word. He's the One sure thing, the One consistent Bright Spot in this broken world filled with broken people.

Here is a section that could use a couple of tweaks:

"seek and find (Save would be a better word than find) the lost
He gave His life
to ransom(s) us all"

(the "s" should not be there.)

Thank you for reminding us that God is the only One we can always count on. May he bless you as you write for Him.
* I meant 'He' (with a capital H!)

Lovely...thank you!

God Bless~
And I agree- Amen!
I enjoyed this and liked how you brought snippets from songs or verses together in one piece. Congratulations on ranking 8th in your level. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.