The Official Writing Challenge
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Reality check to many people I'm sure.
This story is definitely on topic. Perhaps in order to show rather than tell there could have been dialogue between husband and wife. Thanks for sharing.
Really enjoyed this whole piece, nicely done!

God Bless~
Good story line. I would have liked to peek into the couple's lives to get a better feel of the conflict. Maybe some dialog. Good ending.
This is a great story. I think you nailed the topic and did a nice job with a strong message. Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level and 21 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards. Happy Dance!