The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/19
Great job with the topic in this well written entry.

Thank you and the powerful message you shared with us.

God Bless~



I do agree with your comparisons! I found reading this story a bit difficult, as it seemed choppy- not flowing smoothly. Maybe combine some sentences. Glad that God keeps his promises!