The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the point you make. I also like the slow progression to understanding what's really going on. At the end, I thought it must have been a near death/out of body experience. And in the end, none of those things she bought during her life up to that point mattered at all. Only the ONE Light mattered. Good job.
01/11/19
Fantastic!
Great job with this powerful entry...You held my attention from the first paragraph to the very last word!

Loved this! Thank you.
God bless~
Just wow! I did not catch on till the end. I was thinking maybe you were in a thrift store. Sure hope this places! Great jog!
01/12/19
I LOVE this entry! Awesome job. I think you can work on your ending a bit but I love your original idea! Good work!
01/17/19
Congrats!
God bless~
01/17/19
Congrats!
God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 16 overall. Happy Dance!