The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/19
I apologize for story format. The original document has the paragraph breaks. They didn’t carry over when submitted.
Oh how I love this inspiring, encouraging, beautifully written, beautiful story.

Maybe the following sentence could be expressed more clearly: "One day it came to a devastating halt with an ungodly act out of his control and life as he knew it became void.

Favorite phrases: "...every unnecessary thing available." (Yep.)
“…with no fears of it being taken away.” (Yes, having nothing to lose is great freedom!)
“…replenish the account with praises to the Lord.” (Yes! Thank you for helping us to see it this way.)
“…epic spiritual wealth.” (Another YES!)

Great job. Blessings to you.
01/11/19
Wow! Such an amazing entry along with a powerful message, Thank you!
God bless~
What a unique take on shop! I would like to see more showing of the action, rather than mostly telling. Be careful about exposing who the author is before the judging is complete.