The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this account - even though it was a bit predictable.

Have you ever timed five minutes? Do that and see whether you think your sisters would sit that long in silence (unless they were eating.)
Great job with the topic in this well written story. I enjoyed it...Thank you!
God Bless~
I enjoyed the story. It would be awesome to really have an encounter like that!