The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/19
I love your power of description like 'frosty metal cups all in a row' I enjoyed this story so much, and think it is a winner. Thanks for all your hard work! God bless. Trudy
Cute story! I remember my 7 year old brother being entrepreneurial and gathered a jar of ants to sell. No one bought them, however!
01/11/19
Truly delightful read! I enjoyed this entire story from beginning to end.
Thank you,
God bless~
01/13/19
I Love your story. So adorable! I believe you mixed up the girl's names once though, "The morning grew hot as they waited patiently for customers. When Joanne wasn’t watching, little Becky couldn’t help but drink a few cups of lemonade." That's so easy to do.
01/17/19
Jennifer,

Congrats on your honorable mention and recognition for this lovely and entertaining delightful story.

I love your style!

Keep writing my friend giving God all the glory for your special gift.

God bless~
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