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This much needed story could minister to a LOT of unhappy people. I love it. I'm also printing and sharing it with a few people. Great job.
I agree with Claudia that this is typical of how many people, including Christians, live today. And then they wonder why their lives are messed up! Well written. Just a few minor typos: Needs a question mark at the end of the sentence, "What are you talking about?" and a close quotation mark after the word water." Good story, may we each heed the clarion call to put Christ in first place.
Love this story! Nicely done!
The story beautifully illustrates many lives today.
"It was like trying to get water from wells that held no water" is so true. Well done. Thanks for encouraging us to seek Him.
Nice! Very believable dialogue. Good job.