The Official Writing Challenge
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Just WOW. I couldn't stop reading it. If it was longer it would be a true page turner for me. Great story line. I think you needed a comma instead of a semi-colon at the end of the first paragraph, but as long as her "Sister" is doing THAT, the semi-colon can slide. I'm inspired. Nice job.
This one left a lump in my throat and a deep ache in my heart. It was very moving and compelling. Great work.
Great story for the topic and subtle reminder of how Jesus' voice strengthens us to walk the difficult journey. Nice writing!
Wonder-full story. One suggestion: 'off the cuff prayer' doesn't fit in this scene. Maybe breath prayers?