The Official Writing Challenge
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It is obvious you are a good student of God's Word. I love reading anything from one who loves His word. Although Truth is certainly woven throughout this article, I had a hard time connecting the ideas. I know that you know EXACTLY what you're saying but it was a little bit confusing for me.

One part that made me scratch my head and say, "Huh?" : "why listen to those who had “got religion” and become holy rollers? We walk securely while they relax in supposed self-satisfaction of their superior understanding."

I think a tightened up re-write might help clarify your message. I did still enjoy it though because I love reading what my brothers and sisters in Christ write. So thank you!