The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/18
Great writing. I love how the final story tied in with the biblical stories. Good job. God bless.
10/19/18
Great job tying all the lessons together.
10/21/18
This is very well written and thought out. I hope you will post this as an article to be shared - after making a couple tweaks. 1) Moses doesn't show up until Exodus. Oops. 2)Not sure about phrase "waste of misguided philanthropy" in reference to "ruthless businessman." Seems a little dissonant - but maybe that's what you want. In my opinion this piece is worth perfecting and publishing.
10/25/18
Congratulations! Thanks for this reminder.
10/27/18
Congratulations on your EC. You've highlighted a whole bunch of dilemmas, and it may well be that the philanthropist may find himself recognized as a sheep in the Matthew 25 parable.