The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/18
Great job developing the story and characters and showing the importance of keeping romance alive in marriage.
Loved it. It worked for her, didn't it? And God's always way ahead of our foolishness, isn't He? He took what was meant for evil and used it for the good of both of them. Good job.
10/22/18
Talk about a spicy story! I love the way Pete comes out of nowhere and decks the loser man. Nice ending, and great take on the topic - even if they did make up a little faster than might be expected. But sticking to the word count can be a challenge.
10/25/18
Congratulations on your HC! Well done.