The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/18
Thanks for this - well done. I can visualize the scene. Also a good message. Hope the judges like it as well - in my opinion we may have a winner here.
10/19/18
Great job recounting this story and tying in a spiritual lesson. Given that policemen are trained to look for certain things, I wonder what it was that prompted them to pull you over.
10/21/18
This is a well-told story. However, personally, I found the concluding paragraph unsatisfying. Wondering if the Lord might not give you a more thought-provoking application/conclusion. This incident is too dramatic to waste.
10/22/18
This was a fun story to read. Suspenseful too. One thing I would have loved was a more pointed punch at the end, however - something along the lines of how, after we give our lives to Christ, we don't have to worry about being inspected for trash (sin) - because our sins are removed as far as the east is from the west.
Congratulations on ranking 14 overall. Happy Dance!