The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a powerful piece. It's a bit on the dark side, but I like that. I tend to be on the darker side too, yet it still shows hope. You had a few typos that a proofreader might catch. The rhyme and message were great. You definitely had a clear Christian message that is in the new rules that makes the reader stop and think. It is beautiful. I also liked your fresh take on the topic.