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07/29/18
Good job with the lesson and comparison between physical and spiritual storms. I was a little confused by your use of the phrase, the eye of the storm" since that makes me think of a brief moment of peace and calm in the midst of turbulence, but maybe that is what you meant?
07/31/18
I think this is a good devotional. I too though question "eye of the storm" in the context of this paragraph. I'm assuming it was an attempt to set a "weather" theme, but you can probably find a better weather metaphor for this context.