The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/18
Wow! Crazy story! Excellent job retelling it! I'm glad they all made it safely!
I like the title and your story held my attention. There was one little stumble for me that broke the flow -- Texas does not have an ocean, though the Gulf of Mexico resembles one. That's a minor "got'cha", but details that confuse the reader's attention matter. An enjoyable read.
07/31/18
Well done! I was with you every mile.
07/31/18
Wondering if THIS story needed the "devious stranger" reference. It raises unanswered questions in this story. I'm sure that is a whole other story for another time.
08/02/18
Congratulations on 2nd place.
Well deserved I was glued
to it and relieved all worked
out in the end. Great description.