The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/18
Great job tracing the story of Hurricane Irma and what it was like to be living in the hit zone.

A couple of tips to make your writing even better:
At the beginning, you could begin with the weather alert in quotation marks, as though it is being announced right at that moment.
In this sentence (I love your imagery), "When she came, it was as though she wore sweeping swirling skirts," instead of writing "it was as though" you could go write into the image -- "she arrived in sweeping, swirling skirts..."
07/31/18
This was a great line: 'When she came, it was as though she wore sweeping swirling skirts of screaming wind gusts.' I could see it.
07/31/18
Really good descriptions - made
me feel I was there. Loved
the line about the swirling skirts. Great to be part of
a caring community. Sigh of
relief. Good work.