The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/18
Good job describing two of the feasts mentioned in the Bible. I think you could take this comparison even further by discussing more about how God's feasts in scripture represent a spiritual truth rather than being a strictly physical occasion like most human feast.

I also think the intro could be more powerful by starting with a sentence you put in the middle of your first paragraph: All peoples feast.

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