The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/18
I enjoyed the glimpse into the supernatural realm. Good job presenting a familiar situation ( birth out Jesus for redemption) from a unique perspective. I wanted to know how the angel was going to be involved. Part of the chorus to the shepherds?
Thee were a couple of mechanical errors but otherwise it flowed nicely.
I think you did an awesome job of writing on topic in an unique way. Your message is clear and goes great with Scripture selected.