The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting story. Reminds me of the tv show, Touched By an Angel. And as with the show, I am uncomfortable with the impression that God forgives and saves just by His love, when the person has no repentance or belief in Jesus’s death and resurrection.

The writing was good and held my attention.
06/15/18
Great job with the development of this story. I enjoyed the pictures of the characters and the love that was shown throughout.
06/15/18
Charming story. Loved it. I loved how the halo was her hat and how you showed an angel could be in any disguise.