The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/18
Beautifully written, heart- felt entry. I could see the scene and feel the bittersweet emotions running through the heart of the mc.
06/15/18
This is a very clear snapshot of what it is like to be the caregiver of someone you love who is suffering. I could imagine myself being there and experiencing the reality of what it really is like to see the soup on his shirt or watch him struggle to do things. Well done.
This is a powerful story. It tugged at my heart. Your descriptions were great. The Bible verse at the end is a perfect fit. Great take on the topic and good job bringing a difficult topic to the foreground.
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 15 overall. Happy Dance!