The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/18
Good job presenting honest struggles and the source for help.

I wasn't quite sure what you meant by a "carer." Is this being taken as a character trait? A career (those in the nursing field)? I think this could have been tied together a little better by starting with the concept of a carer and narrowing in on one of the honest struggles faced by such a person.
06/10/18
This piece held me because I had a conversation with the Lord about this very thing this morning. Very similar conclusion to yours. So thankful for an understanding Shepherd.
Congratulations on ranking 7th in your level and 19th overall. Happy Dance!