The Official Writing Challenge
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Clever telling of a frequent, heart-rending time many have experienced. Very creative development of the piece.
I really loved the imaginative way you told this story, by interspering it with the fantasy element. Some great imagery (e.g. empire of lies) and a good message. Well done.
On point, entertaining and relevant - well done
Congratulation on your placing in the Editor's Choice, Jenny. I really liked your story. It's good to see something with a touch of fantasy. Well done!