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I chuckled throughout the reading. Haven’t we all been in a situation like that? I thoroughly enjoyed the writing and the style. Excellent!
Great job telling the story through the inner dialogue of the MC. I enjoyed seeing the progress of her thoughts.

I may be looking at this through too literal/practical of a lens, but I found myself wondering about the organization and coordination of this event. Each role seemed completely independent of each other, with no overarching vision that they were operating under.
This is so well written! Your transitions from moment to moment are so effortless.

I only wish my revelations of my own self-serving actions were brought to my attention as gently as with your MC. God typically ends up having to run me over with a truck to get me back on track. :)

Great work!