The Official Writing Challenge
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05/27/18
This is a story worth telling. I recommend another try at it without the need to slant towards topic. Stories of God giving us assurance when we are unsure of a loved one's salvation are very encouraging. A little oops - it's Samuel who raised the Ebenezer. Perhaps it would be better to stick with just one of your two Bible scenes and use it for the slant of your story. Definitely worth reworking!
What a joy to know your father talked to someone after all. Praise the Lord for answering all your faithful prayers.