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I like how you compared Paul's sufferings with Job's sobs as he persevered through what to him seemed like pointless punishment. You have effectively communicated what we all must face from time to time--or, for some, even every day. Your prayer was touching, and I found myself asking Father to do the same for me. So, thanks. I am undergoing a trial presently and all I want is to have someone near me, not talk to me, but just be near me.
Oh, I know Jesus is here at home in my heart, but I want to hear another heartbeat in the still silence of my sorrow. Anyway...Very good job, my friend. Keep up the good work.
Congratulations on earning Highly Commended!
This is a delightful piece. You really showcased Paul's trials and spoke to my heart. Congratulations on ranking 5th in your level and 14 overall. Happy Dance!