The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/18
I liked this, though I'm not usually drawn to poetry. I appreciated the clear message. (I think you meant gnash, rather than gash.)
You nailed it about the accusatory voices in our dizzy heads before we met dear, sweet Jesus. And you are right: Oh, what joy He bestowed upon us when we got right with Him. You are a fine poet. Keep up the good work!