The Official Writing Challenge
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With elaboration and some quotation marks, this piece could be convicting. Well, it is convicting. And it is worth refining, I think. Fill it out. Tell us more.
I agree with Linda. Must've been a harsh situation to experience, though, and a little more info would help...such as how you felt, how you went on with your life, how it affects you now, et al. Good job, though.
I'd like to hear more. I liked the part describing mom's facial expression and what it triggered in MC's memory.