The Official Writing Challenge
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The first couple paragraphs really interested me. I think this piece is worth spending some time perfecting.
I love the story of the young Samuel. You've done a good job with your story. God bless.
Love the entire piece. Wonderful job with the topic and great writing.

I enjoyed the way you took Samuel's story and made it your own. Good job!
I loved the start because we were in Samuel’s head, then it became familiar and then informative. It would be great to see Samuel’s emotions carried throughout, particularly at the end.
I love bible stories brought to life, good choice!
You've done a nice job of retelling this story. I liked how you developed the characters. With some tweaking, editing, and a rewrite or two, I could easily see this as part of a book of retelling Bible stories. You have done a great job of writing on topic while still delivering the great message. Congratulations on ranking 8th in your level. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.