The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/18
I can relate to a house filled with kids and all the noise that goes with it. Thanks for sharing this story. God bless.
What an interesting story. I can imagine it must get very noisy some days. I really liked the way you referred to the different children by a characteristic or interest (e.g. Soccer, Compassion, Artist). That was an original way of doing it. Well done.
05/11/18
Great job with the topic, wonderful writing, nicely done.

Blessings~
I can relate too!! The chaos if family can be so full on haha!! I don’t think you needed the extra clarification about Forrest Gump, but certainly when I thought of noise my own family was the first thing I thought of so it’s easy to relate!
05/14/18
Coming from a family where 5 teenagers gathered around the kitchen table with Momma trying to get supper finished before Daddy got home, I was immediately drawn into this piece. Thank you for reminding us to slow down and enjoy the moment for too soon they are gone. Great writing and sharing!