The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written.
Wow...powerful and strong writing. Well done,
Nicely written, love the ending!
As I am sure you know, he is always listening - even before you speak.

Our modern world is noisy and there are many distractions. Finding that quiet time in that deep and quiet place is not easy.

When I find it, it is often in the middle of the night..when all are asleep...

Be patient with HIM.
I can so relate to this piece in the one word moving me to something different than what I intended to do. Well written and enjoyable!
Loved the ending!
Congratulations on your 1st place entry, Nola.

Electronics sure have a way of distracting me from the real message.
Wow, wow, wow, oh and did I say wow? This is beyond brilliant. I think we'd all be shocked if we realized how many people cringed while reading this because they recognize themselves in your MC. My face feels a bit hot too. What a sensational take on the topic. This is a great example of how to write on topic without using or overusing the topic word. Again, I say wow, and congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!
I LOVED this! Love your humor! What a well written example of how our stillness has been interrupted. Great ending!
Congratuations on your well-deserved win. Loved the humour and the honesty that flows through the whole piece. Great work.
Thank you for all of your lovely comments. I feel truly blessed and encouraged.
I’m not on Facebook but I definitely had some ouch! moments reading this. Very well written and SO very on topic.