The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/18
Excellent!

Blessings~
04/26/18
The inclusion of badgers was intriguing.
04/26/18
beautiful!
04/27/18
wonderfully written
I like it. Really like it.
Some critique: I think your opening sentence could be more creative, more colorful. I suggest removing the word WHICH in all the sentences about the animals.
Everything else was wonderful.
I meant opening line, first four words could be improved upon.😏
05/03/18
I enjoyed your poem very much.
This is beautiful. You did a great job of painting a picture with your words. Congratulations on ranking 7th in your level. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.